The men nodded as Roy and Rummy approached, extended their hands, one by one, shook. Rummy leaned in to peck a kiss upon Birdie’s rouged cheek. Roy did likewise. He felt Birdie’s body still, sensed her linger.

“Who’s the little lady?” The boss met Rummy’s glance and demanded an answer.

Before Rummy could speak, Birdie hopped up and took Annie’s hand. “Slide over, Jimmy. Let this dear doll sit next to me.” Her eyes flashed a warning to the boss.

Roy watched as Annie slid onto the seat beside Birdie, fixated on her newfound friend. Birdie waved a manicured hand to signal a waiter. The young man snapped to attention at her side. “Shirley Temple for the little lady, pink umbrella, cherry on top.” She winked at Annie. “That okay, hon?”

Annie nodded and looked down at the tablecloth.

“Thought so. Auntie Birdie knows what the little ladies like.” She smoothed the top of Annie’s head. Turning to face the boss she murmured, “Now you boys get down to business, let us ladies be.”

~ a draft scene from the book I’ll always write

When a man walks into a room, he brings his whole life with him. He has a million reasons for being anywhere, just ask him. If you listen, he’ll tell you how he got there. How he forgot where he was going, and that he woke up. If you listen, he’ll tell you about the time he thought he was an angel or dreamt of being perfect. And then he’ll smile with wisdom, content that he realized the world isn’t perfect. We’re flawed, because we want so much more. We’re ruined, because we get these things, and wish for what we had. ~ Don Draper

5 Comments on “Bing’s Palace~ 1963

    • If I ever finish it, then rewrite it. It is overwritten- three books actually- at this point.

      Thanks for the encouragement, Anneli.
      x
      .

      • It’s a long process, and we can always cut things we don’t need. Easier than trying to come up with something new if it’s missing. You’re doing a great job, judging by the bits I’ve seen. Love your writing!

      • Aw- I’m blushing. I credit my weekly critique group for their support as well as the other writers of the world.
        Thank you for your encouragement, anneli. Writing is a lonely, humbling passion.

      • And such a personal thing too. It takes courage to share it and open ourselves up for criticism. A good critiquing group is invaluable.

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